Story
people reveal themselves through conversation, not merely by the
words they choose but also in their tone of voice, their pauses,
gestures, and body language. Characters boast, question and speculate.
They rage and banter and share confidences. Give your story characters
a chance to talk, and they will reveal themselves in ways that might
amaze you.
"Say What?":
9 Common Dialogue Mistakes
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For
some writers, snappy dialogue comes naturally. Others struggle
to make character conversations sound realistic and exciting—and
struggle they should, because dialogue can quickly attract
readers and draw them into your story.
Dialogue makes your story
reader friendly. Readers eagerly scan a page for the white
space and quotation marks that signal a
conversation between characters. Dialogue is active, immediate,
quick to grasp, whereas dense paragraphs of narrative indicate
heavy reading and will often make readers put the book down.
Poorly
written dialogue usually suffers from one or more of the following
problems.
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Variety of Voices:
Devise a Voice Profile for Each Character
Who
can forget Eliza’s “oawoo!” from My Fair
Lady or Yoda’s “stubborn you are” from Return
of the Jedi? Distinctive characters not only come instantly
alive and draw us deep into the story world, they also live
on in our minds. We quote them. We admire them or fear them.
We even refer to them as if they were real folks.
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